The winds of time shall now carry us to the ancient past, where blood of beast and princess are shed…

As writers, we hear all the time that we’ve got to hook readers in just the first few pages or else. We’ve got to hook agents in the first few pages or else.

Whether you’re looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader, first impressions are vital. Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an agent or editor’s attention, and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged.

JEFF GERKE, THE FIRST FIFTY PAGES

Well then, let’s study those first few pages in other people’s stories, shall we?

Today I snagged from the New Release shelf:

Clytemnestra by Costanza Casati

One of my favorite BBC miniseries of all time is I, Claudius, which is based on two historical fiction novels by Robert Graves. When reading the opening pages of Costanza Casati’s debut novel Clytemnestra, I could not help but recall Claudius’ childhood from the opening chapters of Graves’ novel.

The prose is vivid, but not flowery. The action is raw, but not unfeeling. Spartan princess Clytemnestra is determined to prove she can hunt as well as any Spartan boy, and she even goes to a place of death—a ravine where infant and criminal alike are thrown to their deaths—to find her prey. Casati’s choice to begin her novel with only Clytemnestra helps readers not only acquaint themselves with the Spartan mindset about life and death, but to get a clear-cut glimpse at the titular character as well. Considering the large cast list and family tree provided before the novel, this alone time with the protagonist should help readers see her shine all the more clearly when the stage is filled with supporting characters. If you are one who enjoys historical fiction of ancient times, then I feel Clytemnestra may be a worthy queen for you to meet.

No matter what the season brings, keep reading!

Read on, share on, and write on, my friends!