When I saw the inside of the book cover was filled with unique world-related ads and propaganda, I knew I was in for something fun.
As writers, we hear all the time that we’ve got to hook readers in just the first few pages or else. We’ve got to hook agents in the first few pages or else.
Whether you’re looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader, first impressions are vital. Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an agent or editor’s attention, and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged.
JEFF GERKE, THE FIRST FIFTY PAGES
Today I snagged from the New Release shelf:
The Olympian Affair of The Cinder Series by Jim Butcher
I find myself in a sequel with Jim Butcher’s The Olympian Affair.
Book 2 of The Cinder Series takes a smart approach: start with one character walking through a town with a destination in mind. When a writer takes this narrow focus, they not only give themselves a chance to reacquaint readers with a specific character, but to also re-establish the setting of the world, too. Granted, it’s one town in a fantasy world, but it’s enough to get a sense of what the world is like and how it operates.
Airships are the name of the game here, which is always a fun steampunk concept, and I love that spires take on a whole new meaning through this world. (The fencing swords on the cover are what drew me to pick this book up in the first place.) The writing itself has an interesting rhythm; Butcher deploys short, strong sentences in the midst of long, active prose in order for those brief descriptors to pack a real punch–“The new vatteries stank.”–is a personal favorite of mine. Sensory details like this mixed with banter between two airship captains made the opening pages an intriguing read. If you’re ready to take off for a break from this world (I know I am) then I have a feeling Jim Butcher’s Cinder Spires series would make for an excellent escape.
No matter what the season brings, keep reading!
Read on, share on, and write on, my friends!